Because we met a week later for the last exchange, we didn't have heaps more that's different to show this time, just a bit of progression. Those who weren't fully locked down on their project details have figured that out now.
Everyone who isn't in VCD didn't have much of a presentation-style thing, they just showed their workbook and pictures of what they've been doing, whereas those of us in VCD have been doing a bit more on the actual presentation and how we explain what we're doing, especially since the dossier is our actual final product. Daniel said in industrial they have to make posters to show their work but most of them don't actually know how to design posters so they don't always turn out great. In fashion it just seems to be showing the final garment? I'm not sure - it seems like spending more time on the way they present their concept would be helpful? It was helpful for all of us to have to explain our projects to people from other disciplines though.
They mostly had good feedback for me; they liked the name and sprite character, thought it was cute and the logo/title with the tail becoming the S. They thought I could add a little more into the book. - and some other feedback I already got from people in class today.
The person we had the most feedback for was Vanessa, since she's not sure how to balance their concept of the fake phone rear-view mirror as appearing as a real product at first and then revealing that it's a campaign to get people to put down their phones - and we suggested some ideas about various subtle but sarcastic (?) phrases to use, etc.
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