week 3.2

In class we showed our visual brief draft to other pairs and got feedback. In general people liked it and thought it is easy to understand and the visual style works well.

• There are a few small type things that need improvement
• some people wanted more infographics
• more quotes from people to make it more personal
• The illustrations fit well with bus signage, but the cover doesn't suit it as much
• We do like the cover style and the slight messiness which suits stress, so will have to decide whether to change that or the internal ones.
• People suggested a few things like elaborating on the needs, and adding some bits (eg; people switch off on the bus but also do things)
• the person sitting on the chair looks like they're at a urinal so we need to change that

This is my reflective image. drafts+feedback+stress